Apr
25
How to Know When Your Copy is Bad
April 25, 2006 | Anita Campbell
Jonathan Krantz writes an interesting short piece at the Marketing Profs blog about how to recognize when your copy sucks. Among the dead giveaways he says are:
- Lots of superlatives such as “excellence,” “cutting-edge” and “innovative.”
- Lack of a clear “what’s in it for the customer” message.
- Shortage of tangible, meaty specifics.
- Presence of self-congratulatory chest beating, i.e., “We’re the world leader in . . . “
- Reliance on jargon and business babble.
- “Me too” positioning that’s similar to your competitors’ messaging.


